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Reclusive Butterfly by *saradanielle:iconsaradanielle:



I’m reaping seeds that I’ve sown…
Never imagined they would actually grow
Cause both of my thumbs were black and
I was knee deep in snow.
No sun a shinnin
Clouds plotting my demise
I found a chance encounter
When my flowers bloomed one night
A fabulous social caterpillar began crawling up my hand
As I was placing my bountiful bouquet
Behind a brick wall where my heart stands
He whispered beautiful rainbows into my ear
Showing me I was not all alone
In this secret garden of fear.
In turn, I wrote him inspiration for wings
Then nature took it's course
As sure as a bee will sting
Soon watched him crawl away slowly
Leaving me with nothing but wilted dreams.

Where is my social caterpillar today…
Metamorphed into a Reclusive Butterfly
And flown far far away.
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I am UBER proud of this...
I wrote it in 15 mins.
I was in a fit of "Your such an jerk!!!"

It is a time line of events...
There are A LOT of metaphors...
Kinda amazing if you knew the story!

Such Is Life! :nod:
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~LilMindeeMonstar:iconLilMindeeMonstar: Apr 25, 2008, 3:52:28 AM
letting go of something with such potential would be how my life has been. but i think if you can let it go, that is the only way you can morph into your own butterfly and fly far far away from those people whispering rainbows and lies. ha.

but don't listen to me, im a pessimist.

or as my friend says... an optimist posing as a pessimist.

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*saradanielle:iconsaradanielle: Apr 25, 2008, 5:21:12 AM
Such a hard way out of an easy situation....
Wish it was as easy as morphing myself and flying away as well.

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*ArtisticStrife:iconArtisticStrife: Apr 25, 2008, 5:49:32 AM
Good stuff... kinda make me wanna write...

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*Zelmarr:iconZelmarr: Apr 25, 2008, 8:58:57 AM
I feell your pain. I have been on both sides of that to be honest. Recently I had to break with my girlfriend because she did not truly like me for me...This was a very good poem.